A Ul-Haq’s Online Journal

both “eden rock ” and “walking away” presents moments of separation to communicate ideas about letting go of a loved one.                         However, in “eden rock” this is presented from a viewpoint of a child, whereas in “walking away” it is presented from the viewpoint of a father.

In “eden rock” Charles causley presents as traumatic for a viewpoint of a child. The poet creates an image of separation from his mum and dad, by a stream.  Charles causley describes the stream as “drifted” this gives the reader an idea of natural, slow , separation. so the stream is represented as a wall separating the parents from their son, it could Also suggest that he is scared that If he falls in the river he would be washed away from his parents. Charles causley is trying to communicate ideas about his parents no longer being there to support him through the hard times in his life. However in “walking away” day louis presents the events from the view point of the father,  this makes it look more stressful and emotional for him because this little son is moving on. Also the separation is presented at Swift and sudden because one minute the atmosphere is all happy and postative due to him being with his mother and father, the next minute he is all alone distant from his family.

neutral tones is a poem about a man called Thomas hardy who broken up with his girlfriend.

love is presented as cursed and haunted in “neutral tones” by Thomas hardy.  He starts the poem off by describing a couple standing by a pond. This would be a romantic setting however Thomas hardy says it was on a “winters day” this unfortunately suggest that all the beautiful things in nature decay and die. This gives the reader a sense of foreboding, from the tradition from spring where everything blossoms and grows to autumn where nature starts to change colour. them winter. so this also gives us a sense of pathetic fallacy. in a strange way the dramatic setting reflects their relationship. On the 6th line Thomas hardy says she looks at him “over tedious riddles” this suggest that its almost as if he is now a puzzle to life. In the same paragraph he said “some words played between us” . by saying some he is not being spastic, so this shows he doest care. like they are now strainers.

Thomas hardy describes the girls smile as fake and deadly. he says this because there relationship is dead and there is no emotions left, another thing he says about her smile, is that it is “bitterness” the cold wind is grinding about there break up. almost as if the weather mocking there break up. but she doest want to hurt him to much. At the end of the paragraph he presents a bird as being ominous. he says this because ominous gives us a tense feeling that something terrible will happen. so when he says an ominous bird he is trying to get across that the bird will bring bad news.

in the very last paragraph

Dear Chris McCandless,

I am writing this to show you how your book of Into The Wild has had an impact on me as a person.

Your extraordinary story shows yr transition from society to the iceolated wilderness.

During this essay I will be talking about the main differences between the film and the novel of Into The Wild. A simple explanation of the thrilling story about a young man called Chris McCandless and his endless journey

In the film sean pen presents walt, Chris McCandless’ Dad

George’s mavalous medicine is a book about a young boy who lives in the country side with his mum, dad and horrible grandma.

The book starts off with georges mum and dad heading off out to go to work and to pick up groasarees, leaving George with his grandma. George has to give his grandma her medicine at 6 o’clock. But until 6 o’clock george had to stay with his grandma and listen to her mone about everything. George is forced to make cups of tea for his grandma, and she

it was a freezing and windy night. as i opened the old wooden door the sound of it creaked open slowly, caused several of the birds in the trees behind me to fly away, they werent the only things that were scared ; i was frightened! inside the mysterious abandond hospital , i couldt help but notice water dripping from from the celling and walls.